Wednesday, October 26, 2005

The Grande Dame and the Painter (Deborah)

(in progress)

When Mary Wortley Montagu
Met Monsu Desiderio.
She slipped off her cloak
...............And kicked off a shoe
Saying, would you wish to tarry, oh?

The lady of letters, the man of pigment
Circled each other across decades.
He said Lady, you are of my prescience a figment!
And she: Sir, your sulfurous vision ne’er fades.

Said he, tell me, your face: why so pitted,
.............................................................so craterous?
Parried she: to well-being your pix are most traitorous!
Quoth the painter, Many, lady, by your wit have been bitten!
And my Self, she ripostes, by the Pox have been smitten!

– Deborah Maier
Draft © 2005 D. Maier All Rights Reserved.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Have you ever read any of the novels of John Barth? Your humor reminds me of his (The Sotweed Factor and others).

I love the idea of having a poem in progress on a blog. It can grow and develop like a plant growing.